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Post by Darth1o9 » Fri May 07, 2004 11:53 pm

yeah well im sure i can make it that long if teh campaign last long enough

*would rather be using hw2*

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Post by Big Hed » Sat May 08, 2004 6:25 pm

40000 words or more for a novel eh? No wonder so many people write books :D

well just finished reading the novelette ( [img]tongue.gif[/img] ) pretty good reading.

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Post by Darth1o9 » Sat May 08, 2004 6:33 pm

yeah ANYWAYS BACK ON TOPIC PLEASE ie my story ;)

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Post by Darth1o9 » Sun May 09, 2004 10:40 pm

Korriban – Galactic Imperium Palace

The Imperial Palace was mighty citadel; its thick black walls reach high into the clouds like one of the ancient titan’s of legend standing guard over the land. The Palace itself took up and area the size of a continent, right at the top of the might tower was the Emperors Throne room, just below the throne room was a might hall, and at the far end was a giant window in the shape of Galactic Imperium’s symbol. But this palace hid many secrets, many to dark for the local populous to know about for this planet was not always inhabited by humans, for once it was the homeworld of a might Empire, long since forgotten in folk tales and myth, before the Galactic Imperium arrived on Korriban, the planet was a dead world, a tomb of lost knowledge, knowledge that the Sith Lord wished no one else to know about


The Emperor upon his Throne, reports were coming in of the Imperiums latest victory over the clans near the planet of Forsakened, the Clans fleet had been totally wiped out to last man, The Emperors eyes began to burn with a increasing intensity. Suddenly the Dark Lords attention was distracted as the doors to his Throne room began to open, an Imperial Officer quickly ran into the room
“My Lord, Lady Silagui has just informed us that she has arrived at the Bespin system and trying to locate the target”
The Dark Lord smiled “Excellent commander, anything else?”
“No my lord” He replied
“Very well commander, return to your duties” Felth said
The officer nodded and then quickly turned about and headed out of the room, Felth then sat back in his Throne and closed his eyes. Two of his elite Royal Guard, Red amour clad warriors stood tall, strong and silent in front of his Throne like a pair of statures

A small unknown fighter exited hyperspace above Korriban undetected by the planet defenses, the small vessel quickly began it decent towards the planets surface heading straight for the Imperial palaces main hanger bay. The Vessel sliced though the atmosphere like a hot knife into butter. Within a few moments the small vessel arrived at the main hanger and had landed. Awaiting its crew member was a small patrol of the Imperium Stormtroopers, their guns trained on the strange vessel. Suddenly the cockpit flung open and Jedi Kerensky leaped out and ignited his lightsaber. The Imperium’s troopers laid down a hail of blaster shots, red energy bolts knocked into the side of the vessel. Kerensky was too quick for them; he brought down his green blade upon one of the Imperium’s troopers cutting him in half and with lightning speed he swung to the left and right cutting down trooper after trooper. A few moments later Kerensky’s welcome party lay dead on the floor. Kerensky holstered his saber and head towards the blast doors at the far end of the hanger, the hunt had begun…

Lord Felths eyes suddenly opened their bright white light burning with the most intense light, he looked down at one of his guard
“It appears we have a visitor, make sure he makes his way here”
One of the red clad warriors nodded, he quickly headed out of the room. Felth looked down at the remaining guard
“You my friend are to kill anyone that tried to enter the room, understood”
The Warrior nodded
“Yes Emperor”
The Dark Lord sat back in Throne and meditated for the up coming duel, this seemed to be last ditch effort for the Clans to end the war, if Felth was defeated his Imperium would be lost and confused and would allow the clans time to build up for a counter attack, this would not be allowed to happen

Kerensky Entered the turbo-lift door at the far end of hanger, suddenly the doors shut behind him and the turbo-lift began move without his command, the Jedi banged on the walls, the door and the command console to avail. A few moments later the Doors behind him flung open, Kerensky peered though the door, and in the distance he could hear a booming voice
“Greetings Young Jedi, I have been expecting you”
Kerensky walked though the door, and then he sensed it, this place reeked with the stench of the dark side, you feelings of anger and hatred that filled the room overwhelmed him at first, he never felt anything like this in his life, all he could think about was how one place could be filled with such a concentration of negative feelings, he couldn’t believe that the galaxy contained this much anger and hated, let alone one person.

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Post by Darth1o9 » Thu Jun 10, 2004 8:50 pm

how did this get here [img]graemlins/eviltail.gif[/img]

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Post by Sushi Master » Thu Jun 10, 2004 8:53 pm

BACK FROM THE LAND OF THE DEAD!!!

*edit* oi u, thats top secert [img]tongue.gif[/img]

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Post by Darth1o9 » Thu Jun 10, 2004 10:22 pm

it was never gone ;)

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Post by nickersonm » Fri Jun 11, 2004 12:51 am

The many uses of private forums.

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Post by Darth1o9 » Fri Jun 11, 2004 1:49 am

anyways, thankyou for your input, it was so helpful, please keep it up ;) the more the better, i mean jesus, this topic is now complete with your input, come again any time

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Post by Kyp678 » Fri Jun 11, 2004 6:04 am

You still smell....

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