Star Wars : The Mangal Rebellion

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Post by Cain » Wed Feb 18, 2004 11:52 am

This is the story for the half of the trilogy it is a "beta" The first TC is already up on http://www.swrebellion.net Rebellion The Protectorate ,second is Rebellion The Remnant and last will be Rebellion The Emperor's Return.....I'm a fan also of the Homeworld series ....and I need opinions from you guy's Image
Here it is :


The Star Wars story: Mangal Rebellion trilogy episode one.

1.0 They thought he was dead… They felt his disappearance. As Luke and Vader watched the Emperor flail down the long shaft to the Death Star’s core, they thought no one could have survived the fall, much less the explosion of the Death Star. And in a way, they were right. But any engineer would have realized that the Emperor’s body hitting the core could have never caused such an explosion. It must have been more than just the Emperor’s body that caused such a discharge in the reactor core. His body was fully charged with energy from the Dark Side, and when combined with the massive power of the Death Star a dimension rift was born. A gate was created between this dimension and another dimension. By this gate some part of the Emperor escaped….his ghost…his essence !

1.1 An old Jedi holocron made by Master Ikacn Mangal prophesized the possibility of using the power of the Force to tear such a hole in time and space, but no Sith Lord or Jedi Master had ever accumulated such power to reach this hypothesized dimension.

1.2 The ancient holocron dates from a time when the force was one for all her users. It said that there are multiple universes both close and far from this one. In this intradimensional space, there is a cycle of movement and a moment when the Force from this dimension can be linked with the Force from our closest parallel dimension. In honor of the wise master who made this prophecy, the ancients named that dimension the Sajuk’Otke’Mangal , the Close-One viewed by Mangal.

1.3 The Emperor Palpatine was as surprised as any to find himself in this new dimension. He awoke slowly to find that things were very similar, yet somehow different. He felt oddly linked with the Emperor from Mangal in a way that the force could not explain, but none of them realized that they were the same person…not until the end .

1.4 Events had not moved as rapidly in the Mangal dimension, and the Empire was still building their first Death Star at the moment of the dimension rift. But here the Empire had split its efforts for security’s sake and was building two death stars at the same time. The Second one only contained the energy core and some support structures. It was used for power test’s and experiments. When the interdimensional explosion occured, in the Mangal they were testing a method of enhancing the power of the generator core. The composite energy structure of the Death Star Two vibrated at the same energy harmonic in both dimensions. A link was forged between the dimensions supported by the massive power of the Dark Side.

1.5 All the elements were in place for the prophecy to happen. As the rift was starting to appear the emergency alarm sounded on all the unfinished decks of the structure. In less than one minute the core was penetrated and a web of Dark Side energy breach the container field around the core and climb up a shaft, discharging into the nearest person from the core. The Imperial fleet officer collapsed as the Dark Side flowed into him. The discharge delayed the construction of this death star. Because of the massive number resources needed for two death stars, the Emperor decided to focus on the other one that was already in an advanced stage of development.

1.6 …On Coruscant in the Imperial palace a dark figure was speaking to a holo link…
- You know what to do Grand Admiral ! …..if they continue to support the rebels I will dissolve them !…I do not need a Senate to rule the Galaxy ! ….And you will finish the project in time !...No one can stop us !.... I will crush this insignificant Rebelli…on …..ahhhh [ the Mangal Emperor stop’s talking and put his hand where his heart was... closing his eyes ] ….ahhh….get me Lord Vader... there is a disturbance in the Force... I have not foreseen…

1.7 …on the Second Death Star….The Imperial officer, Pazak Mekon, slowly woke up and didn't feel any different, but the our Emperor Palpatine was hiding within him. Bit by bit, Palpatine took over Mekon’s body just as he had taken over the Republic Senate in our dimension. Slowly but deadly, stealth was something Palpatine understood. He was so careful, Mekon and the others never knew. The Mangal Emperor felt the new power growing in Mekon. Always wanting his most powerful minions closest to him so he could watch and mold their progress, the Mangal Emperor constantly promoted Mekon and by the time of the destruction of the first death star Mekon was promoted to become the grand admiral of all imperial forces only days later...


1.8 In this dimension, Luke was able to focus on his training on Daggobah much more that in ours. At the moment when he entered the tree cave, he realized the wisdom in leaving his lightsaber behind. Once in the cave, he had a vision of the menacing Vader raising his red lightsaber and he rushed to confront him, with a swift move Luke strike Vader’s head that was cut off. As the head rolled to Luke's feet, the helmet cracked open to reveal first Luke's face, but then a new face. Somehow it was familiar, then Luke realized it must be Vader's face. So similar to his own, he realized it was also his father's face when he was young. Vader's massive part mechanical body had never fallen, and now Luke saw its black armored hand outstretched as if asking for help. Calling to him. Then, the vision disappeared.

1.9 After overcoming his shock of realizing Vader was his father, Luke became convinced he could change his father only by not fighting him. He reflected back on Ben's sacrifice on the Death Star and wondered if Ben also had felt the only way to defeat Vader was for a loved one to try to show Vader what Vader had become by not resisting. He knew that his father has still the good side in him. However he knows how insane this would seem to anyone who had not shared his vision, so he says nothing to Yoda but begins to form a plan. When he goes to save his friends on Bespin City, doubt and fear first make him resist Vader, but then he puts his lightsaber down. Vader again says, “Luke, I am Your Father !” but this time Luke replies calmly, "I know. But Darth Vader is not who you are. You are Anakin. Search your feelings and you know this to be true, to be what you want.” Believing that he will be able to change Vader if he stays with him, Luke agrees to join the empire and embrace the dark side. Soon Vader promotes him to admiral in the imperial fleet and Luke receives an improved dark command helmet from Lord Vader and a complete training. He also works with the Imperial Army,as a true new admiral, developing a new type of stormtrooper called the Protector.
They are not only effective because of their improved combat training, but also because they have been trained to be fair, wise, and try to help the native populations of the planets they inhabit.

1.10 Luke explains his methods by arguing that more diplomatic behavior from troops will increase the support and trust on an occupied planet, which will make them much easier to use and manipulate. But Luke had his own agenda and makes sure that this troops are totally loyal to him. The Emperor begins to suspect such a sign of compassion is not a sign of a true dark side user and doubts Luke's words that it is all a deception to maintain control. As a test, he asks Luke to kill his father and take his place but Luke refuses. When he explains to his father what he has tried to do, he realizes he has failed. Vader is still to loyal to the Emperor.

1.11 Despite his feelings of failure, Luke resists becoming one with the Dark Side, and escapes. He knows now the dark and the good side of the Force and masters both of them becoming a true balanced force Jedi. Most of his Protector troops remain loyal to him, and agree to join the Alliance. The leaders of the Alliance are desperate and readily believe that this was Luke's plan all along, since Luke had never fought the Alliance, and only defeated some rouge Imperial Admirals and their fleets.

1.12 The Alliance decided to accept him with the ex-imperials and Luke takes the name of "Lord Protector." He decides he will not kill his father in combat, only remove the Emperor. A new army is formed that will fight along side the Alliance with the aim to remove the old order and the Emperor and install the balance in the Galaxy. This army will be known as the Protector's army !

Back Story Episode 2
Rebellion: The Remnant

The final confrontation comes….

1.13 In the Mangal dimension Luke is now powerful in both the Light and Dark Sides. He finally confronts the Emperor but the Emperor is too strong and Vader kills him, as he did before in our dimension. But instead of hurling him down to the core, opening a dimensional gate, Vader cuts the Emperor with a mortal lightsaber blow before collapsing. Mekon, with the essence of our Emperor inside of him, is nearby as Grand Admiral of the fleet protecting this Death Star. He feels the Mangal Emperor's passing, and with the Mangal Emperor out of the way, the ghost Emperor allows himself to fully awaken. Mekon now realizes who he truly is and that now has his chance to finally take control of the Empire.

And now Episode 2 : The Remnant : Road to Coruscant begins…..

2.1 As they orbited Endor the night the Emperor died, the admiral Mekon is overcome with a vision in the Force telling him that his presence in this dimension has begun to upset the balance of the Force so much, that it is urgent that he return to his own dimension or he will wither and die. He is guided to find the remains of a strange ancient installation and starts a project for a dimension gate based on the redesigned Star Forge technology. In this dimension parts of the Star Gate were preserved, only scuttled here by Master Jedi Raven. While the manufacturing ability of the Star Forge was lost forever, the dark force power generators had been preserved by the Jedi Council who had
hoped to convert them to the light side in order to use the force to heal devastated planets and ecosystems. It was an impossible task, and the generators were hidden in an empty system.

2.2 Fearing his enemies would exploit his growing weakness, Mekon never lets anyone know that this is a dimension gate, just a new more secure shield type for the remnant death star III. He brought Star Forge generators to the heart of the Imperial space at Coruscant to keep them close to him while they were repaired and the components for the dimensional gate were designed and constructed. But this diversion of resources and the overall situation of the empire allows the New Republic to advance closer, day by day. The cohesion of the Empire was already week after Endor and now start to disintegrates more. But the remains of the Imperial army and navy are to big for the Alliance to take on so easly. Also the new secret weapons of the Mangal Emperor now came to light striking fear in the New Republic fleet. The Empire is now split between Admiral Mekon, with his diminishing power base centered on Coruscant, and two more powerful Admirals, Fyyar and Pellaeon. Soon these three will decide to form a triumvirate and work together in order to stop their common enemy, the New Republic.

2.3 On the other side, Kyle Katarn in this dimension has never turned his back on the Force, and take his place at Luke’s side. After the second death star was destroyed, the Alliance regroups and gains momentum to push the remnant imperial forces back towards Coruscant. While victory seems inevitable, the Remnant is still a force to be reckoned with.

2.4 At one point Leia becomes pregnant with the Solo twins, and Luke goes to be with her through her most difficult part of the pregnancy. The birth of these powerful baby Jedi’s sparks a strong hope in Luke, and he returns to the Alliance stronger than ever.

2.5 Luke is now Prime Consul of the New Republic, as Lord Protector and supreme military commander off all the allied forces. He is given the empty wilderness moon of Yavin to recreate the Jedi Academy and use it as the Protectorate HQ.Luke names now the moon as Protectorant the new hope. The Old Alliance HQ becomes the New Republic Senate and travels between the Republic planets to gain more control and demonstrate the democratic rulership to all the systems who are joining now the New Republic.

2.6 The battle rages in the Galaxy and the Remnant shakes under the blows of the New Republic on its way to Coruscant. The story continues with epic battles between Admirals Fyyar, Mekon, and Pellaeon on one side versus Luke, Kyle, Solo and the rest of the New Republic. The balance of power is now forever changed in favor of the Republic. The Remnant creates new awesome weapons and scrambles for resources but has no longer the means to mass produce them. The New Republic adapts rapidly and grows fast. The light removes the dark, and new system’s join the New Republic, adding to her already growing strength ……..


…now you as Mekon will have to buy your self time to go back to our’s dimension, deal with your “friends” Fyyar and Palleon and keep the Triumvirate in working order, fight with the New Republic as the Force is telling you that at the end of the battle….on Coruscant you will find again a way to escape.

Story written by Chimera and Cain with DeathSquire36 support also.
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Also here is a screen background for the second TC: http://www.swrebellion.com/hosted/cain/ ... Background Image

Seeya guy's !
..and pls.escuse my protocol translation droid ...has problems with basic ;)

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Post by deathblane » Thu Feb 19, 2004 11:17 pm

Ok. I'm guessing that what you've posted is the plot summery for this particular piece of fanfic. I can't get to the actual story on the link (access denied) but this looks quite good. If you want to post the entire thing here then that would be kinda helpful ;)

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Post by InocPrime » Sat Feb 21, 2004 2:53 am

T'would certainly be more convenient [img]smile.gif[/img]

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Post by Cain » Wed Feb 25, 2004 9:33 am

still not ready....but btw. the story comes from my TC (total conversion game) and also the pics...they are actual 3D ships...do you like them guy's ?...I hope there are some Star Wars fans here ?! ...or rong adress ?!...I hope that you could see the background [img]smile.gif[/img]


Here is my preferate SW music for the Walpaper :

http://www.swrebellion.com/hosted/cain/ ... r.Song.wav

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Post by Calavan » Tue Mar 09, 2004 5:11 am

sweet, I like the story! theres a lot of star wars fans on these forums, but i don't think many of them, or anybody else stops by here :(

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Post by InocPrime » Sat Mar 13, 2004 11:59 am

I could see the background, it looks good [img]smile.gif[/img]

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Post by Cain » Sun Mar 14, 2004 11:31 am

Thanks ! ...I funded this forum following a link in the New Rebellion http://swnr.themaw.net/ ....Btw very cool and easy to use forum you have here guys...sorry I can stay to much .... I'm always on the http://www.swrebellion.net/
forums .... (must become a member to access them).
Anyway all the staff that I pot up here is my second total conversion for a Star Wars strategy game named "Rebellion" ('98)....were the player confronts the AI in a galactic battle [img]smile.gif[/img] ...anyway if you know SW fans send them there [img]smile.gif[/img]


Seeya and again thanks [img]smile.gif[/img]

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Post by InocPrime » Sun Mar 14, 2004 2:23 pm

I can't wait to try it [img]smile.gif[/img]

And if you find them, stop by and read some other people's stuff. It's not the most active board here, but we're alive ;)

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Post by Cain » Tue Mar 16, 2004 8:31 am

Originally posted by InocPrime:
I can't wait to try it [img]smile.gif[/img]
And if you find them, stop by and read some other people's stuff. It's not the most active board here, but we're alive ;)
I already did ...cool stuff btw [img]smile.gif[/img] ....


PS.Well until the relese of "The Remnant" TC the CDC Design Bureau is remakeing the First one in the Protectorate II and the action starts at Hoth now [img]smile.gif[/img]

To play a TC you need the original game "Rebellion" (or Supremacy) and RebEd to load it [img]smile.gif[/img]

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